Thesis 2

 

Thesis: There is a gender code that says that men who show emotion are weak. This is false, but it is more destructive because of the emotional damage it has on young boys and men alike, and the implementation of this gender code in all aspects of society such as the school or workplace. As a result, this gender code needs to be abolished

Point 1: When looking at the harmful effects that gender code enforcement can cause, it is important to highlight the code that males are seen as weak if they show emotion, and the incalculable damage that this causes.

Point 2: When observing the gender code depicting men as weak when showing emotion, it can be shocking to see how this gender code affects numerous other aspects of interaction involving males.

Point 3: A final reason concerning the destructiveness and need for the dismantlement of male gender codes concerning weakness and emotion is the impact that this gender code has in places such as school, or the workplace, and the relationship skills that men develop.

Group: How do these 3 Points connect? How? Why?